Thursday, May 21, 2009

最傻的小傻瓜

today little stupid ( 小傻瓜) was not happy...

little stupid was attended a BI class,

and the teacher asked the class to write a poem.

little stupid cant even think on a topic that he have to write.

suddenly, he thinks on the pass.

so he started to write.

here is his poem (any grammer mistakes plz 4give) :-


you

Where are you?
You just leave me behind and walked away.
Where are you?
I just couldn't find where you are after that day you leave.

Are you tried to ignore me?
I just couldn't know what you are thinking now.
Is our relationship is over?
Is our friendship just over because of that?

Finally i have found you.
But I not dare to chat with you.
Even if you appear infront of me,
I will choose to run away from your sight.

How could it been like that?
We were having our happy time together.
We studied together, joked together and console each other when we facing some problems.
But it all changed after that day.

I miss the time we have been together.
I miss the time we have fun together.
I miss the message that you sent to me.
I miss you.

After losing you, I was lost.
Feeling like lost in the jungle.
I lost my path, my way that I have to continue my journey.
I even lost the meaning of living in this world.

But soon all have become past tenses.
I will still waiting for you,
Wait until the end of the world.

2 comments:

  1. using real feeling..
    a love poem..
    express more wil be better..

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  2. if express more then he wil feels more bad... tat little stupid juz too stupid writing tis kind of poem...

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